
Snow crunches underfoot
As I make my way inside.
Silent hall, purring cat
I sit to wait, with hands clasped
In my lap.
The creak of the door
Breaks the quiet air.
And a dark robed figure
Approaches with a smile
Behind a long white beard.
Candles are burning
The icons glowing
He speaks with kindness and
Wisdom is in his eyes.
I feel comforted.
Pale winter light makes the window aglow
As the glint of a tear
Streams down my face.
He listens to my heart,
My burden to share-
Cold wooden floor
Rubbing against my knees,
I peer through the candlelight
And behold the Blessed Virgin
In extreme humility...
Prayers usher forth,
Forgiveness at hand,
A path of repentance begun,
The weight of the years,
At last becoming undone.
©2010 ALT
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wow. beautiful verse...and moment of redemption and surrender...great magpie.
ReplyDeleteOoo...this is very similar to a dream I had once! Gorgeous imagery.
ReplyDeletethe trueness of these words...the experienced of the moment! your gentle sonnet whispers so deeply...
ReplyDeletethe power of the saving grace.
wonderful!
I enjoyed reading your poem. What's a Magpie Tale, a sort of community-creative project?
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ReplyDeletemy beloved was signed in...
LOL
the above comment is from me :)
I need some more coffee, I see :)
Wonderful sensory images!
ReplyDeletehmmm almost a religious take on the weight. Nicely written poem..
ReplyDeletePoetry: the perfect catalyst to unburden the soul. Nicely done!
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Everyone else said it better than me...beautiful verses...unburdening the soul leaving space for peace to flow inside.
ReplyDeleteA great moment. Haunting imagery.
ReplyDeleteeach line leading to confession
ReplyDeletevery very nice
I felt every one
You write so beautifully, I don't believe you have any heavy buden you need to repent!
ReplyDeleteThank you all for the kind words of encouragement ~ greatly appreciated.
ReplyDeleteVery atmospheric!
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